dunes 1
Sat Shri Akal!
On Solarider's blog i saw these very beautiful pictures. He called them " Sofa Dunes".
Immediately i was inspired by these pics. I tried to more or less copy them, but his are far more better.
When i started writing this poem, so many thoughts were running through my mind. Too many thoughts. So i decided to make a series of poems on this "dune-theme". A few of them are roughly drawn already. This one is more or less in its final state. But knowing myself, you never know for sure.
On Solarider's blog i saw these very beautiful pictures. He called them " Sofa Dunes".
Immediately i was inspired by these pics. I tried to more or less copy them, but his are far more better.
When i started writing this poem, so many thoughts were running through my mind. Too many thoughts. So i decided to make a series of poems on this "dune-theme". A few of them are roughly drawn already. This one is more or less in its final state. But knowing myself, you never know for sure.
dunes 1
why ask for more
out of pure syllables
fell yet my heart
you asked my head
i ran
i ran
into your rippled world
a morning and a noon
stumbled, stranded
in your secret dunes
i ran aground
to read and read again
your sacred runes
that night
eternity waved
in a cuneiform
posted by manpreet kaur at Thursday, March 02, 2006
4 Comments:
Thank you, Solarider Ji.
For the inspiration and for taking care of the mistakes.
For the words of encouragement too.
And how can i change something in the text? How can i change a mistake? Is that possible?
waheguru
If ever there is a mistake in the text or any other alteration to the post after having published it - go back to the dashboard and click on edit posts. That'll do!
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