Thursday, March 02, 2006

dunes 1

Sat Shri Akal!


On Solarider's blog i saw these very beautiful pictures. He called them " Sofa Dunes".
Immediately i was inspired by these pics. I tried to more or less copy them, but his are far more better.
When i started writing this poem, so many thoughts were running through my mind. Too many thoughts. So i decided to make a series of poems on this "dune-theme". A few of them are roughly drawn already. This one is more or less in its final state. But knowing myself, you never know for sure.

dunes 1
why ask for more
out of pure syllables
fell yet my heart
you asked my head
i ran
i ran
into your rippled world
a morning and a noon
stumbled, stranded
in your secret dunes
i ran aground
to read and read again
your sacred runes
that night
eternity waved
in a cuneiform

4 Comments:

Blogger manpreet kaur said...

Thank you, Solarider Ji.

For the inspiration and for taking care of the mistakes.
For the words of encouragement too.

Saturday, March 04, 2006 9:17:00 PM  
Blogger manpreet kaur said...

And how can i change something in the text? How can i change a mistake? Is that possible?

Saturday, March 04, 2006 9:28:00 PM  
Blogger Otpreka Singh said...

waheguru

Sunday, March 05, 2006 4:44:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

If ever there is a mistake in the text or any other alteration to the post after having published it - go back to the dashboard and click on edit posts. That'll do!

Monday, March 06, 2006 1:55:00 AM  

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